HELP: Constructive Comments Please

apa pendapat korang? CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS PLEASE. Hiring is basically finding the best person or persons to accommodate your organisation needs with the budgeted resource. Well I strongly feels that I fit the bill. My experience clearly show that I evolve from basic financial statements and general accounting responsibilities to in depth analysis and incorporating business planning. My experience in this will continue to evolve as I am always working and finding ways to improve myself. My employer has acknowledge my contribution, and not only translate it financially, but also in terms of responsibility and task ownership. They are comfortable of my leadership and planning capabilities, that at the end of the day, churned out optimum result. My communication skills are as strong as the KLCC towers. I have shown from my presentation and training bankwide that being clear and precise will make me stand out of the rest. With this skills I know that I can contribute alot to your organisation as communication and execution are among the key element of project management. My high energy and quick learning style enable me to hit the ground and size up problems rapidly. My colleagues would tell you I'm a team player who maintains a positive attitude and outlook. I have the ability to stay focused in stressful situations and can be counted on when the going gets tough. I'm confident I would be a great addition to your team. In my current employment, I have develop my planning, communication and supervision skills. Supervision here is not only in monitoring my team, but largely there overall monitoring and control of specific projects and tasks. You can expect me in being proactive all the time, evolving within the organisation needs and overall business environment. With my attention to details and risk minimisation steps to every task, I know that I will stand out from the rest of the field.